1."Playcomputer"isnotthecorrectEnglishexpression.Thecorrecttermis"playcomputergames."2.Thephrase"watchingTV"shouldbefollowedbyacommasinceitispartofalistofactivities.3.Thesentence"Ialsoliketoplaycomputergames."shouldbeinthepresenttensetomaintainconsistencywiththefirstsentence.4.Theword"out"shouldbeomittedfrom"playoutinthegarden"tocorrectlyexpressplayinginthegarden.5.Theword"Mummy"isinformal;thecorrecttermis"Mom"or"Mother"informalEnglish.6.Thesentence"Isetupthecomputersothattheycouldworkfromhome."shouldalsobeinthepresenttensetomatchthestyleoftheprevioussentences.7.Thephrase"workfromhome"iscorrectlyused,butitwouldbemorenaturaltosay"workathome"inthiscontext.8.Theword"sothat"iscorrectlyusedtoindicateapurpose,butitcouldbesimplifiedto"sotheycould"foramoreconcisesentence.9.Theterm"expand"shouldbeusedwithahyphenwhenitisanadjectivemodifyingthenoun"resource,"asin"expand-resource."10.Thesentence"Theplatformisdesignedtoexpand-resourceandshare-resource."shouldbetwoseparatesentencesforclarity,withappropriatepunctuationandcapitalization:"Theplatformisdesignedtoexpandresourcesandshareresources."Revisedtext:1.IpreferwatchingTV,alsoliketoplaycomputergames.2.MyMomsaysIcanplayinthegarden.3.Shesetupthecomputersotheycouldworkathome.
英语表达:玩电脑用playcomputer对吗？
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